Monday, 12 May 2008

Chapter 10:"Two lights"

Hi friends! I'm here to post chapter ten from story,THE LAST CHAPTER, but before that, I'll tell you about how it will be continued.
1)After posting chapter 10, be ready because the story continues: this was the "first season". Then I'll post "season two".
2)Just wanted to say thanks to: Nadine, Meghna and Aguss! It's great to know that you like the story!
3)Enjoy chapter 10.

Claire was thinking and crying at the same time. She didn't want to see her family dead! But, what could she do? The murderer was in front of her with a gun, Kate's mum was dead, and her family was arriving home... .
"I can't do anything. I'll die now and my family too!"-thought Claire.
She was very sad when a light appeared near the window. It was Kate! She was there to save her friend and her family!
Claire was surprised. The light said to Claire's family(who was entering the house):
-"Don't enter! I'll save Claire.".
-"Kate! But...your mum's dead!"-said Claire's mum.
Lyle and Claire's dad couldn't believe what was happening.
Kate said:
-"I know, but she's now with me. We're here together"-said Kate.
Claire's mum could see Kate's mum light. She smiled.
Suddenly, "Kate" entered the bedroom and, when the murderer saw it, he became blind. The light was very strong. Claire could scape with her family away. She thanked Kate and her mum, and then, she left.
In the car, by the way home, she told her mum:
-"When I was crying there, his mobile phone rang. I think it was his son. The conversation was very clear, because the two spoke loudly. His son's name was Peter. I could see a photo of him in the murderer's cell phone. He seemed to be the same age I am."-.
They finally arrived home. Claire tured the TV on and saw a title which said "Girl's murderer's dead. He was blind and hewas dead when the police found him. The police can't tell how the man dead. The girl's mum was also found dead in the same house"-.
Claire was calm. She could now live normally again.

Hope you liked the last chapter. Be sure to check the blog regularly beacuse season two is coming. Season one is over, but season two will come with new surprises: there'll be love, murder and mistery. Comment and tell me if you liked the chapter and what do you think about season two.

6 comments:

Meghna said...

Hi Stephi,
owwwww.........I'm so gad you didn't kill Claire! And the story end was fabulous...I do not have words to describe how awesome you are :)
I'm eagerly waiting for season two!

BTW, Thanks for telling me about Nadine's place...After you told me, I've been trying to open it today but the blog shows some errors like all other learnersblog...I think it's some wordpress problem but I'll try to contact him soon :)

aguss said...

niice season =)
I´m waiting for season 2!
kiises =)

Nadine said...

Hi Stephie!
WONDERFUL! She didn't die! Yay! I never knew he had a son, WOW! And Kate is so amazing, I love how she saves the day, what a great friend. I say Kate should save HER life some day too?! :)
You are so awesome, as said Meghna, I am speechless! FANTASTIC STORY! And thanks for your comment, my mum is getting better!! :) ;)
P.S I love the idea about Season 2! I am so excited!!! Can't wait now!Looking forward to reading and following the adventures of Claire, her family and Kate.
@ Meghna
I am eagerly waiting for season 2 too!! She is SO good!
@ Aguss
I'm waiting for Season 2 too really excitedly, I hope there is SO much events!!

Nadine said...

Hi Stephie!
I see.... I thought Priscila was older! But it is a great idea to share this blog!!
Where did you come up with the name from?
It's SO good and creative!! ;)
Yes i have read chapter 10! I commented back then! ;) It is SO entertaining and amazing! Can't wait for the Season 2, good idea!

Holly said...

Hi Stephi,
I LOVE your story!!
I've just read all ten chapters and loved them all. Your such a great writer.
I can't wait for season two!!
Please comment back on-
holly3.learnerblogs.org

See-Yah
Holly =]

Nadine said...

Hi Stephie!
I love your story too! You are truly a fantastic writer!!
But i want to say, do you yet know when you shall release the Season 2? Because i CANNOT wait!!! You are making me EXCITED!! ;)
Also, keep posting, i am waiting intently. Can't wait for your next post and Story!
And also, please tell Priscila that I'd like to here a post from her too! :)
Bye and stay in touch!! Bye Stephie, bye Priscila!!! :)