Monday, 14 April 2008

Chapter 7:"A true friend"

Hi everybody! Here's chapter seven from my story, hope you're enjoying it! Thanks to all the people who has commented on my posts, especially to Meghna, Nadine and Aguss!

When Claire asked who was there, the person said:
-"I'm Kate's murderer". Stop looking for me. If you continue, I'll kill your family"-.
Claire was very surprised and shocked too.
The next morning, she bought a camera because she was going to go to a museum to took some photos. She really enjoyed taking photos with Kate.
When she returned home, late at night, she sat on the sofa and watched TV. She was watching cartoons, despite the fact she was seventeen years old. She suddenly saw something near the forest. She took her camera and a gun, and left the house.
When Claire was near the door, Lyle asked her:
-"Where are you going, sister?"-.
-"I forgot something outside"-answered Claire, and, after saying that, she left.
She walk into the forest, the deep and horrible forest, where her bestfriend died. Suddenly, she saw something: a man. He was talking on the phone, and Claire noticed that his voice was very loud. She remembered the call. The voice seemed to be the same as the person's. The man looked at Claire and said:
-"So...you're Claire. Say goodbye, girl."-.
The man was going to kill her. That man was Kate's murderer! She was crying when she saw a light. When he was going to kill Claire with a gun, that light protected Claire. The man run away.
-"We'll meet again Claire"-shouted the man.
Claire wondered who the light was. When she realised who it was, she smiled. It was Kate. She was a true friend.
-"Thanks Kate"-said Claire.
Kate smiled.

Chapter eight soon. Hope you liked it!

6 comments:

aguus said...

this was definitely the best chapter you´ve written =)
kisses =)
aguuss

Nadine said...

Hi Stephie!
OH MY GOD! She is SUCH a great friend. without Kate, she would ahve died! I hope I make a friend like that! AMAZING!!! :)
You are just... AMAZING! ;)
I wonder if he'll come again!? I hope Claire kills him!
Anway, you are making some great chapters there, keep it up! I am looking forward to the next one.
CAN'T WAIT!!!!
SURPRISE MY FRIEND, SURPRISE ME!
Hugs

Meghna said...

Wonderful stephie.....I agree with Nadine....Awesome..
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter :p

Nadine said...

Now Stephie, if you don't keep writing the chapters I'll cry!
You can call me a fan, love the story. Just can't WAIT for the next, Meghna, Aguus and I are total fans and are eagerly waiting for the next chapter!!! :) :P
Thanks for your comment.
Argentina, WOW! I haven't seen any pictures of Argentina. Sounds BEAUTIFUL! ;)
I live in Sydney, Australia where there is the Opera House, Harbour Bridge, Sydney Aquarium, Wildlife World, Luna Park and HEAPS more! If you don't know what those places are, don't be afraid to ask! :)

Nadine said...

WE MEET AGAIN STEPHIE! :)
Don't worry, I love commenting and also, the same happens to me, sometimes I am SO busy at school with tests and stuff, that I forget to post!
That's fine, I understand don't worry! ;)
Yes, Argentina IOS beautiful! I wish I could come so I could meet you one day and we could become GOOD friends! Maybe I will, I'll tell you so, maybe we could see eachother! :)
Bye Stephie, can't wait FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!

Nadine said...

WE MEET AGAIN STEPHIE! :)
Don't worry, I love commenting and also, the same happens to me, sometimes I am SO busy at school with tests and stuff, that I forget to post!
That's fine, I understand don't worry! ;)
Yes, Argentina IS beautiful! I wish I could come so I could meet you one day and we could become GOOD friends! Maybe I will, I'll tell you so, maybe we could see eachother! :)
Bye Stephie, can't wait FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!