Season 2-Chapter 5:"Peter's uncle"

Hi everybody! Here I am, with a new chapter of the story I'm writing. In the last chapter, Peter told Claire that his father had been a murderer and that he had killed Kate. Peter didn't know his father was a murderer, so Claire believed him. But then, Ricky, who's Peter's uncle, phones Peter. Then, they entered Claire's house. Now...chapter 5!

Claire and Peter had already entered to the house.
-"Sit down and I'll bring ice cream. It's OK for you?"-asked Claire.
-"Sure"-answered Peter.
Peter was waiting for Claire in the living-room and Claire went to the kitchen.
-"Hi mum!"
-"Hi dear. How was school? Any news?"-asked Claire's mum.
-"Look: while Peter and I were walking, Peter's uncle phoned him. His name was Ricky"-told Claire.
-"So what?"-answered her mum.
-"Don't you see it? Ricky could take revenge on us! Because of me, Peter's father died"-told Claire.
-"Well, we'll discuss it later. Go with your boyfriend, he's waiting for you. Go."-said Claire's mum.
Claire smiled.
-"Well...here I come with the most delicious ice cream ever. Home-made!"said Claire.
-"Mmm...thanks Claire"-said Peter and kissed his girlfriend.
-"At what time are you leaving? Because your uncle phoned you, and..."said Claire.
-"Don't worry. Is not something important. I nearly never see my uncle, so I don't know him so much. But, well...he's my uncle after all."told Peter.
Peter knew Claire was worried. So he asked her:
-"What's wrong?"
Claire looked at him. Then, she said:
-"Your uncle, he worries me. Your father was a murderer and...what if he is one and wants to take revenge on me? Because of me, your father died. I mean, I was just defending myself. He wanted to kill me!".
Peter didn't answer. He was thinking.
-"Look, he isn't like that. He's good guy. I know: we can all have dinner together tonight so you can meet him. Agree?"-said Peter.
-"Ok. Great."said Claire.

What will happen when at the dinner? Hope you liked the chapter. Stay tuned because new chapters will come!

Chapter 10:"Two lights"

Hi friends! I'm here to post chapter ten from story,THE LAST CHAPTER, but before that, I'll tell you about how it will be continued.
1)After posting chapter 10, be ready because the story continues: this was the "first season". Then I'll post "season two".
2)Just wanted to say thanks to: Nadine, Meghna and Aguss! It's great to know that you like the story!
3)Enjoy chapter 10.

Claire was thinking and crying at the same time. She didn't want to see her family dead! But, what could she do? The murderer was in front of her with a gun, Kate's mum was dead, and her family was arriving home... .
"I can't do anything. I'll die now and my family too!"-thought Claire.
She was very sad when a light appeared near the window. It was Kate! She was there to save her friend and her family!
Claire was surprised. The light said to Claire's family(who was entering the house):
-"Don't enter! I'll save Claire.".
-"Kate! But...your mum's dead!"-said Claire's mum.
Lyle and Claire's dad couldn't believe what was happening.
Kate said:
-"I know, but she's now with me. We're here together"-said Kate.
Claire's mum could see Kate's mum light. She smiled.
Suddenly, "Kate" entered the bedroom and, when the murderer saw it, he became blind. The light was very strong. Claire could scape with her family away. She thanked Kate and her mum, and then, she left.
In the car, by the way home, she told her mum:
-"When I was crying there, his mobile phone rang. I think it was his son. The conversation was very clear, because the two spoke loudly. His son's name was Peter. I could see a photo of him in the murderer's cell phone. He seemed to be the same age I am."-.
They finally arrived home. Claire tured the TV on and saw a title which said "Girl's murderer's dead. He was blind and hewas dead when the police found him. The police can't tell how the man dead. The girl's mum was also found dead in the same house"-.
Claire was calm. She could now live normally again.

Hope you liked the last chapter. Be sure to check the blog regularly beacuse season two is coming. Season one is over, but season two will come with new surprises: there'll be love, murder and mistery. Comment and tell me if you liked the chapter and what do you think about season two.

Chapter 9:"Murder again"

Hi everybody! Sorry I haven't posted, but I'm now here to tell you the latest news about the story: first of all, here's chapter nine. Secondly, the end is near! Don't miss any chapter! In other post, I'll tell you about the end, and how it will be continued. Now, enjoy!

And after saying that, Claire's mum shouted to her husband and Lyle:
-"Come on! Let's escape! I'll explain you later!"-
As a result, everybody left the house and got into the car. Claire's dad started driving. Suddenly he asked:
-"Where?"-
-"To somewhere! Please daddy! Just hurry up and drive to...let's go to Kate's house! Her mum will help us!"-said Claire.
-"Yes, Claire's right! Go there!"-said Claire's mum.
When they arrived, Kate's mum opened the door and make some milkshakes for everybody.
-"Now that we're here...could somebody explain me what's happening?"-said Lyle.
-"Well, Kate's murderer is looking for Claire. We can't leave her alone."- explained Claire's mum.
-"You're safe here"-said Kate's mum smiling.
-"Well...I don't know if we're safe, but we're better here than into my house"-said Claire.
When it was ten o'clock, Claire went outside the house to breathe and think. It was cold. Her parents were at the supermarket buying some clothes and some food. Kate's mum was watching TV in the living-room.
Suddenly, Claire saw a shadow near Kate's mum. Kates' mum shouted. Claire entered the house...Kate's mum was dead! Claire started crying. She knew the murderer was near her.
The murderer was behind her. He catched her and took her to the bedroom.
-"At last...I told you not to follow me...you didn't care. Now, these are the consequences, girl"-said the murderer.
Claire was crying. She saw her family's car arriving to the house. The murderer had a gun. Claire couldn't do anything.

Will Claire survive or will the murderer kill her and her family? Don't miss the next chapter!

Chapter 8:"Escape"

Hi friends, I'm posting chapter eight from the story...Thanks to all the people who is commenting! Thanks to...Nadine, Meghna and Aguss! Enjoy the chapter!

Claire couldn't believe that Kate saved her: she hasn't had a friend like her before.
-"Friend...understand, you're in danger! Protect your family and yourself..."-said Kate.
-"Kate...I'll continue. I need justice! Understand me, never will happen to me or my family."-said Claire
Claire's mother was looking her daughter trough the window...
-"Is she crazy? Who is she talking with?"-said
Next to Claire's mum was Lyle, who said:
-"She's becoming crazy...I think she went mad since...Kate's dead..."-said.
Claire's mum went with her daughter at the garden.
-Mum, look it's...Kate?"-said Claire. But Kate was gone. Claire didn't understand: Why was her the only one who could see her?
That night,in her bedroom, Claire said:
-"Kate...everybody thinks I'm crazy. Why? I'm not crazy!"-.
After saying that, Claire went to her mother's bedroom and said 'Good night'. But Claire's mum was sleeping. When Claire said to her 'Good Night', she didn't woke up.
-"Mum?"-said Claire, worried.
Was she dead? No, she was sleeping. She was dreaming. Suddenly, she woke up.
-"Claire! Sorry! Now..I know...you're not crazy, you can really talk to Kate!"-said Claire's mum.
-"Yes. She's a true friend. I don't know how, but I can talk to her. Why are saying that? What happened?"-asked Claire.
-"I...I had a dream a few seconds ago. Kate talked to me, and she said that I had to protect you, that she could talk to you..."-said Claire's mum-"She also say that we had to run away because her murderer was looking for you! We've to escape!"-said Claire's mum.

Will Claire and her family escape or will the murderer find them before? Chapter nine soon. Hope you enjoyed it!

Chapter 7:"A true friend"

Hi everybody! Here's chapter seven from my story, hope you're enjoying it! Thanks to all the people who has commented on my posts, especially to Meghna, Nadine and Aguss!

When Claire asked who was there, the person said:
-"I'm Kate's murderer". Stop looking for me. If you continue, I'll kill your family"-.
Claire was very surprised and shocked too.
The next morning, she bought a camera because she was going to go to a museum to took some photos. She really enjoyed taking photos with Kate.
When she returned home, late at night, she sat on the sofa and watched TV. She was watching cartoons, despite the fact she was seventeen years old. She suddenly saw something near the forest. She took her camera and a gun, and left the house.
When Claire was near the door, Lyle asked her:
-"Where are you going, sister?"-.
-"I forgot something outside"-answered Claire, and, after saying that, she left.
She walk into the forest, the deep and horrible forest, where her bestfriend died. Suddenly, she saw something: a man. He was talking on the phone, and Claire noticed that his voice was very loud. She remembered the call. The voice seemed to be the same as the person's. The man looked at Claire and said:
-"So...you're Claire. Say goodbye, girl."-.
The man was going to kill her. That man was Kate's murderer! She was crying when she saw a light. When he was going to kill Claire with a gun, that light protected Claire. The man run away.
-"We'll meet again Claire"-shouted the man.
Claire wondered who the light was. When she realised who it was, she smiled. It was Kate. She was a true friend.
-"Thanks Kate"-said Claire.
Kate smiled.

Chapter eight soon. Hope you liked it!

Chapter 6:"A call"

Here's chapter six from my story! Enjoy it!

Claire was happy but scared at the same time. Her friend looked beautiful, but...how was Kate there? Wasn't she dead? But Claire knew that she returned to tell her something. It semeed to be something very important.
-"Claire, thanks for all the things you've been doing for me. You've always been a very good friend of mine"-said Kate, happily.
-"Kate, look, I'm very sorry...I saw you, but I didn't recognise you...I'm very sorry. I felt and I still feeling guilty, so I've decided to find your murderer."-cried Claire.
-"Please, don't feel like that. You didn't recognise me. Everyone has mistakes."- said Kate.-"But now I must tell you something. You're in great danger, Claire. The murderer is looking for you. Please, stop with this. Don't put your family in danger..."-said Kate.
-"I'm sorry, friend. I've decided to do this, and don't matter the risk, I'll find the murderer."-said Claire.
-"Thanks."-said Kate.
Kate smiled. She was happy to have a friend like Claire: a very funny girl and a very loyal friend.
-"Claire, dear, Claire?-" said Claire's mum. She needed to tell her daughter something.
-"Mum, mum...look, there's Kate, she's returned...look"-said Claire
But there was nobody there.
-"Dear, I know you miss her a lot...but..."-said Claire's mum
-"But..."-said Claire
-"Go to sleep, dear, it's late"-said Claire's mum.
When Claire was at her bedroom, the phone rang.
-"Hi?"-said Claire
She noticed that the voice was very loud...and she didn't know the person.
-"Who's there?"-asked Claire

Chapter seven soon. Hope you liked it!

Chapter 5: "A message"

Hi! I'm posting chapter five from my story. Enjoy it.


At the police station, Kate's mum said to Claire:
-"Thanks for doing this. You're a very loyal friend. Kate was saying that all the time, and now, I know she was right"-.
-"Thanks. I loved Kate. She was and she's still my bestfriend"-answered Claire.
Then, a man said:
-"Enter please"-.
When Claire and Kate were in the building the policeman started asking.
-"Well. We have here a man who says he saw everything. He's so shy, so we're going to tell you what he said."-said the policeman.
Claire looked at Kate's mum. She was nervous.
-"He says he saw a man with black hair and blue eyes. He was wearing a jean and glasses. We also know he had a tatoo in his hands"-said the policeman.
-"Well, that's good. We know more now, so we can look for him."-said Claire
-"Are you crazy girl?. You can't do that. You may be in danger."-said the policeman.
But Claire said"thanks" and she left with Kate's mum.
It was ten o'clock at Claire's house. Claire was in the garden, reading, when she heard a noise. She walked to the forest and she saw a light. When she turned to see who was there, she couldn't believe it. She looked again, but it was real. But she wasn't scared when she saw that. It was Kate. Yes, she was dead. It seemed to be a very beautiful light. Perhaps Kate had returned to say Claire a message.
-"Don't be scared, friend. I'm dead, but I needed to tell you something"-said Kate.
-"What?"-answered Claire.

Chapter six soon! Hope you liked it!

Chapter 4: "A conversation"

Hi everyone! I'm posting chapter four from my story. Enjoy it!


Claire was very decided: she was going discover the mistery...who killed Kate?.
-"Dear... you're so tired. Please,...sleep. Go to bed,honey"-said Claire's mum.
-"Right. It's late. Tomorrow I'll go to the police departament to ask some questions. Good night"-said Claire
Claire's mum was worried. She was very decided and something bad could happen to her: perhaps the murderer could kill her or kill somebody she loves.
Claire's mum and Claire's dad were talking in the kitchen while Claire was at school.
-"You know, I'm worried about our daughter. Something could happen her, I don't know..."-said Claire's dad.
-"Me too, but you know her...when she decides something, she is going to do that. We have to be careful...she don't have to know the truth."-said Claire's mum.
Claire's dad and his wife had a secret they didn't told Claire before. It seemed to be something strange. But they weren't going to tell Claire that. They've decided to tell her another truth.
When Claire arrived from school and while Lyle was at the library, Claire's parents had a conversation with their daughter.
-"Dear...we must tell this to you."-said Claire's mum.
-"What?"-said Claire.
Her mum looked at her husband and then she said:
-"You're adopted Claire. We aren't your real parents."-said Claire's mum
Claire was shocked.
-"So, where are my real parents?"-said Claire
-We don't know,but..."said Claire's mum when her daughter said:
-"You are my real family because you have been looking after me since I was a year old. You always cared about me, and that's what real parents do with their daughters or sons. You've given me love, you've given me everything."-cried Claire.
Her parents smiled. Claire too.
-"Thanks for understanding us, dear. We love you"-said Claire's dad.
Claire cried and then, she smiled.
The next morning she was with Kate's mum at the police department. They were ready to begin the search, the search for Kate's murderer.

Chapter 3 : "A shock"

Here's chapter three from my story...Enjoy it!

Claire's mum was thinking.
-"Come on, tell me mum!"-shouted Claire.
-"Well...,it's Kate, your friend. She's dead"-said Claire's mum.
-"How? Where? When? Tell me, please!"-cried Claire.
-Somebody killed her in a forest,dear. Her mum says it happened tonight. A murderer killed her in the forest near here. I'm sorry"-said Claire's mum.
Claire was crying. Kate and she have been friends since kindergarden, and now, she was dead.
Claire remembered her episode at the forest. That girl who shouted her was her friend! How couldn't she recognise her? That was Kate's voice!
-"I'm an idiot! I could save her, and I didn't!"-cried Claire.
She run to her bedroom. She needed to think. Claire knew she had to find the murderer. It was going to be a very dangerous mission, but she needed to find the man who made this to Kate.
It was morning. Claire couldn't sleep in the whole night. Claire went downstairs to have breakfast.
-"Good morning dear. We know this won't be a good day for you, but try to be happy. Kate loved you. Please."-said Claire's mum.
-"I'll try to, mum. This isn't easy for me. Understand that."-said Claire.
-"Right dear."-answered Claire's mum.
-"I've to look for Kate's murderer. And I'm going to find out who killed my friend."- said Claire.

Chapter four soon. Thanks for reading and comment please!

Chapter 2: "Bad news"

Hi everybody again, here's chapter two from my story...

and...she became calm. It was a friendly but scaring rabbit.
-"Oh my God...what shall I do now...?"-she wondered.
She knew where she was because she was near her house. She could see her parents' car parking in her garden. It was 11:30 and her brother was at his friend's house. So she run to her house and sat in the sofa.
-"Claire, dear...where's Lyle?"-asked her mother.
-"Hi mum...Lyle?Oh,he's at Jack's house. He'll be back in a minute."-answered Claire.
-"Well...I'll go to my bedroom with your father...we're so tired. Good night dear."-said her mother-"And wake me up if Lyle comes from Jack's house!"-added.
-"Ok,good night"-answered Claire.
After that, Claire remembered the unfortunate episode at the forest. She knew that voice, but she couldn't see the girl clearly.
She decided to phone a friend.
-"Hi Mrs. Thompson. Is Kate there?"-asked Claire to her friend's mother.
-"Oh, hi Claire. No she isn't here. We had a discussion and we don't know where she is. I'm so worried."-answered Kate's mum.
And after that, Claire became worried. Where was her friend? She decided to go to bed when Lyle appeared.
-"Well, it's midnight...go to bed Lyle, it's late."-said Claire.
-"Right..."-said her brother. And he went to bed.
Before going to her bed, Claire said her mum(who was sleeping):
-"Mum, Lyle is here"-said Claire.
-"Thanks dear. Now go to sleep, it's late. Good night."answered her mum.
And Claire went to bed. Before leaving her parents' bedroom, her mum's cell phone rang.
-"Hi?"- said Claire's mum.
Claire could see her mum's face after talking on the phone.
-"Is there something wrong mum?"-asked Claire.
Her mum's face was white. Claire knew something was very wrong.
-"Claire, you must know this..."-said Claire's mum
-"What?"-asked Claire.

Chapter three soon. Hope you like the story!

Chapter 1: "Something Unexpected"

Hi everybody! I'm posting my first story here, so hope you'll enjoy it. Here's chapter one from my story...


It was ten o' clock. Claire was ready to eat dinner, when her mum said:

-"Dear, me and dad are going to go to a restaurant. Look after your brother and be careful! Is that clear?"-said her mum.

-"It's alright mum..."-said Claire.

And after saying that, her parents left. Claire and her brother Lyle were watching TV when the phone rang.

-"Claire..."-said Lyle

-"What?"-answered Claire

-"It's Jack, he wants to invite me to go to his house...can I?"-said the boy

-"Right...be here at midnight. No more than that. Is that clear?"-asked the teenager

-"Right..."-answered Lyle.

Now Claire was alone at her house. She was watching TV when she heard a noise outside.

-"What was that?"-she wondered.

She was alone, so she decided to see what was happening. She took her torch and went to the garden. The noise was louder and louder...she walk after the noise, and when she decided to see were she was, she discovered and new, strange and lonely place, a place she has not been before. It was something like a forest, but stranger. The noise disappeared. She run to her house when she saw something: a girl crying.
-"Run, get out of here!"-said the girl.
Claire run. She couldn't understand what was happening. A man was near the girl, and when Claire run away, the man killed the girl. She stopped near a tree when she realised somebody was running after her. Then she turned to see who was behind her and...

Chapter two soon. Please comment and tell me if you liked it!